are the new pov is correct

this is the full pov

he was robbing an atm when i goes for him he was trying to run away but i kill him and i give him medicine attention then he left the city

is it correct now

i was in the parking for stolen car and i see this guy wearing a balaclava and i go for him to see his id but he called for his friend and they tried to kill me i killed one of them and the fib agent killed the second one after that they leave the city