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Jordie Glockz

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Name: Jordie McLovin
DOB:02/14/1998
Gender: Male
Nationality: Hispanic
Sexuality: Straight
Place of Birth: Chicago, Illinois
Residence: Los Santos
Parents: Jay Mclovin , Maria (Garcia) Mclovin
Weight: 225
Height: 6'2
Natural Eye Color: Brown
Natural Hair Color: Dark Brown

Before the Incident:
Jordie was born in Chicago, Illinois to a Pristine Detective father and a Hispanic mother. Jordie grew up always wanting to be like his father, catching the bad guys and sniffing out their trails. Even posing as them interested Jordie. He idolized his dad and would do anything he could to be just like him. Occasionally, Jordie would hear his parents fighting at night, his mother would yell at him that what he's doing is wrong and he's gonna go to jail for it and put us in danger. Jordie never understood why his mother was so adamant about his father's job until he found out just exactly what his father did. Jordie father was widely known for always getting the information he wanted, however nobody ever knew how he got the information. Once Jordie was old enough he went straight to the police academy to learn the ropes he made his way through the ranks quickly, all the way up to Detective in Training. He was instructed by none other then his father Jay McLovin. Over his training he realized why his father was so good at his job, it's not because he was good at working in the law instead the exact opposite. Jay taught Jordie everything he knew about working inside and outside the law and how to act as a criminal. How to walk like a criminal, talk like a criminal, eat like a criminal, and sleep like a criminal. By the end of Jordie's training he had surpassed his father and was appointed to work with him. His father showed Jordie the tactics he used to get what he wanted including, (breaking fingers, taking off fingernails, waterboarding, etc...). Jordie had a tough stomach and his admiration of his father was the only thing that kept him going. Jordie's father put him through rigorous physical and mental pain, training Jordie on how to fight against uneven odds and also how to shoot with precision leaving him confident and capable to take on a 1v2 situation.

Incident:
Jordie and his father had forgotten to tie some loose ends from his fathers past who had come back and kidnapped both of them. Jordie's father was interrogated and killed and didn't spill a secret, Jordie was only totured for mere amusement and they took out Jordie's left eye and replaced it with a prosthetic camera eye that is always rolling feed directly to the them. They were able to see everything Jordie saw and used him as an involuntary rat. They let Jordie go, so they could get info without him being able to interfere. However Jordie happened to know someone with the exact same kind of eye, Stephanie Fettuccine. She was able to replace the eye he was given with another eye that was no longer hacked, meaning Jordie could use the recordings as he pleased. Jordie used his newfound tech and knowledge to track down the men who killed his father, he found them in a city called Los Santos. Jordie was able to receive a transfer from the CPD Detective division to the SAHP Detective division in Los Santos. He was able to track down the men who killed his father and he found out they were higher ups in a prominent gang in Los Santos. Jordie now poses as a lowly criminal to try and find out what gang exactly it was. Jordie's motivation lies in the ability to stop crime where the law protects it by using any means necessary to do what needs to be done. Jordie doesn't want revenge, his interests are to prevent it from happening to anyone else in the future. After being in SAHP for a very long time Jordie received a transfer to the Federal Investigation Bureau in the big city of Los Santos. Jordie now uses his technology and his abilities to infiltrate gangs and pose as one of them. Jordie gains the trust of the gang only to gather evidence and is legally affiliated with FIB.

Results:
-Jordie has a camera eye that records 24/7 and can be viewed by anyone he gives access
-Jordie specializes in infiltration and can pose as a criminal to blend in
-Jordie can take on a 1v2 situation
-Jordie is familiar with weapons and violence and it takes 4 people pointing guns at him to get him to stop
-Jordie may use unorthodox methods of interrogation( Torture )
-Jordie has intimidation meaning he does not need 3 guns to make you surrender (This does not apply to robbing only hands in the air)
 

Austin Woods - Amore

The North Face Jacket guy
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Pending approval from Mike West
Outcome 4 denied
Outcome 5 can't torture when FIB already has 4 bad cops, until swapped with you.
Outcome 6 2 guns pointed in 1v3, fear must be shown. No 1v3s, or not showing fear with more than 2 guns
 

Sam Pluxury

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BIO rejected based on rules for state 1.12 FIB already has 4 Corrupt BIO's

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