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Lil Tee

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Name: Tee Yip
Gender: Male
Age: 22
DOB: 27/07/1999
Nationality: British
Sex: Stright
Place of Birth: South East England
Residence: Los Santos
Parents: Dontavious Yip (Father) Rebecca King (Mother)
Height: 6'2
Weight: 85kg 187lb
Body Type: Average
Eye Colour: Ocean Blue
Hair Colour: Grey

Where it started.

Tee Yip was born in South East of England on 27-07-1999. He lost his mother at the age of 4, because she went to Russia, to work for the KGB. Dontavious Wilder, his father. Decided to leave Tee's town of birth after that. They traveled from city to city, from state to state. Just to make sure nobody knew that Tee's mother went to Russia, in the middle of the Cold War. At the age of 18, Teeleft his father and started a life in Los Santos. First a taxi driver, then a bus driver. While driving the bus, Tee got shot by 1 guy in red, with an AK. 2 shots in the chest, and 1 near miss on the head. Tee went full throttle, to get out of there ASAP. He called for help on the radio, no response. At that moment, Tee decided to follow his father's path. Joining the government. Tee finished the last ride, went to the hospital to get his shot wounds fixed up. And applied for the LSPD as soon as he could. He got hired by the Captain of LSPD, Brian O'Conner. After a few months, LSPD was under fire. The chief (Tiana Murphy), was accused of being corrupted. Daniel, the deputy chief, told Tee about it while going on patrol together. Tee didn't believe it at first. But when Daniel got fired, and the Chief told Tee that Sheamus was corrupted and then he wanted to destroy the LSPD. It got clear, Sheamus was right. And shortly after, the chief got fired, resulting in the disbanding of the LSPD, and Tee got fired of his fresh Sergeant rank. The FIB shortly followed, leaving the city in chaos. Tee joined the army, went up to Sergeant Major because of his duties during the unofficial purge going on in the city. Tee joined back the LSPD when Cash Yip became the chief.

LSPD

Tee's career was going up. Busting criminals, and helping his colleges, who felt like a second family to him. Tee became Lieutenant of FTO (the training division) under command of Cedric Williams. Tee took over when Cedric left the LSPD. He took Moureo, as his LT. When Moreno stepped down, Ragnar became LT. At some point, Tee stepped down, resulting in a demotion to Staff Sergeant. This had a rather big impact on Tee, but it got even worse. He was talking with Navo Grey when he won a car. He was so happy and wanted to show her the car. But he had to go to work first. When I came back, he got the news. Nova Grey was shot dead. Tee was furious. He worked with Tommy East on the case. The killer was never found. Years passed by, but after 3 chiefs. Tee got promoted again. Captain of Patrol. Tee was so happy with this. He worked on several great divisions. But he got demoted before even 1 of them could be launched. Tee got demoted all the way down to Sergeant, due to an LOA of 5 days. Tee didn't take this lightly. He got a second therm of issues. He picked up smoking again and was rarely on duty. The more people forgot about him, the worse it got.




Outcomes:
- Tee always has his radio on him, just in case something happens
- Tee will put his job on the first spot. During dangerous situations, Tee will go in there. (for fear-RP reasons, the situation cant be a guaranteed death. He can get near robberies, but he won't drive off cliffs or do anything stupid while at gunpoint. This only applies when Tee likes his job, the people involved and the situation)
- Tee can take bribes.
- Tee can sell illegal items he has found from criminals.
- Tee can easy a 2v1 because of his past.
 
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Jonathan Thomas

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Hello,
Would you like to explain outcome 6 clearly because you never mentioned Tee was in a family, you only mentioned his parents in his backstory.
 

Lil Tee

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Hello,
Would you like to explain outcome 6 clearly because you never mentioned Tee was in a family, you only mentioned his parents in his backstory.
I mean City family
I can just delete it as Corrupt bios are OOC
 

Jonathan Thomas

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Hello,
I cannot approve of outcome "2" because if Tee does not like the job or the person or situation like you mentioned, He can then drive off cliffs which is Power Gaming and power gaming is a server rule break
I also cannot accept outcome "5" because 3 or more people versus you will have to be considered as Fear-RP which is a server rule break.
I can only accept this bio if you are willing to change outcome "5" to a 2v1 and remove or rephrase outcome "2".

Awaiting your reply
 

Lil Tee

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Hello,
I cannot approve of outcome "2" because if Tee does not like the job or the person or situation like you mentioned, He can then drive off cliffs which is Power Gaming and power gaming is a server rule break
I also cannot accept outcome "5" because 3 or more people versus you will have to be considered as Fear-RP which is a server rule break.
I can only accept this bio if you are willing to change outcome "5" to a 2v1 and remove or rephrase outcome "2".

Awaiting your reply
I said Tee won't drive off cliffs or do anything stupid.

This exact Bio I used in server 1?
 

Jonathan Thomas

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Hello,
Please edit the title to include your in-game ID​
 

Jonathan Thomas

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Hello,
This Bio is Approved
Outcome 2: You are still not allowed to jump off a cliff as it is powergaming
Outcome 3: You are only allowed to take a maximum of 20,000 bribe
 
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