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PredZen07

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Name: Pred Zzen
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: White
Nationality: Indian
Place of Birth: India
Sexuality: Straight
Weight: 80kg
Height: 5'11
Eye color: Black
Hair color: Black
Tattoos: Yes
Strengths: I Never and ever leave any work incomplete.
Weakness: Money


Life Story: 200+ Words
Satya was born in a very poor family. His father was unemployed but still he was very satisfied with his life. When He was 10 years old, his father got a government job in a city, since they were residing in the village, for the first 4 months, his father had to travel 120 KMs a day to reach his office, his father used to attend 4-4 hours long journeys on trains every single day. However, his father still was able to fulfill every need of the family and they were more than happy with their life. Everyday, Satya and his mother, used to go to the bus stop to pick up his father on a scooty. After the 4 months period, they shifted to the city where the office was located and he had to change his school, they had to transport everything from their home at village to the city. A new phase of life began, He took admission in a new school and got engaged in academics. However, due to the heavy workload and stressful schedule, his father got addicted to alcohol, his dad usually took it to release his stress but it soon became a habit and started drinking very frequently. He was very disappointed to see this and thought that He would not give any sort of stress to his father and he started taking academics very seriously and used to study the whole day. Finally, he did his graduation and he started searching for jobs and opportunities. One day, his parents went abroad to attend one of his cousin's wedding, He had to skip it as he was in the final year and his exams were going on. After exam, He tried contacting them but he was unable to do so. Satya thought that they might be busy in the wedding function so he didn't call again. Next day was his graduation, He tried calling again but they didn't receive the call again. After the graduation event, he tried calling his parents again but failed again. At last he called his cousin, and got to know about the truth that his parents met with a planned accident and were murdered brutally by a bunch of criminals. After the graduation, Satya went on to become a secret undercover agent in the Federal Investigation Bureau (FIB). He then worked very hard to clear all the criminals in the city. He worked tirelessly and got promoted to a high command of ( UC ) Undercover. Finally he found the gang behind the death of his parents and arrested a total of 11 criminals involved in this murder and killed them to take the revenge of his parents. After the case he went back to LA and decided to stop the crimes and help every people those who are suffering from crimes and every situation.


Outcomes:

1- Satya can offer to provide information to Illegal organization and legal organization about each other for bribes
2- Satya can easily clutch 1v2 situation because of his legal org experience (will show fear when needed)
3- Satya can drive off road while emergency (by following proper RP rule)
4- Satya have a ballistic waterproof hidden bodycam/camera in his glasses by 24/7 for his safety
5- Satya can inject truth serum for getting information (by following proper rp)
6- Satya can recognize people with their voice and clothes.
7- Satya can break someone's bodycam. (using "/try")
8- Satya can pickup any weapon from the ground and use that for his own defense. (within reason of rules)
9- Satya can offer to become a citizen hostage for 100k maximum and Leo hostage for 100k maximum
10- Satya can threaten Police/Citizens to get his safe way (Not abuse)
 

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