Rejected FAIL RP | 94377

[Simmba]

1.) I have no idea when he started giving demands
2.) What is 4 3 2 1 and bang, where is 5 4 3 2 and 1 ?
3.) He started counting at 00:52 secs, so ideally 4sec or 5 sec will get over at 00:57 sec but he opened fire at 00:55

Completely fail rp
Thanks

 

[Yuta Okkotsuu]

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[Yuta Okkotsuu]

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