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Rejected Personal Biography | Sensam Xhosa | 72083

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Sensam Xhosa

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Name: Sensam Xhosa
Gender: Male
Age (IC): 17
Race: Brown
Nationality: Pakistani
Place of Birth: Kashmore Sindh Pakistan
Sexuality: Straight
Weight: 70kg
Height: 5'10
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Silver Grey
Tattoos: No Tattoos
Strengths: Loves Silence, Stay's calm in almost every situation and a better driver.
Weakness: Friends, Family, Rank chaser and Hates everything which disrespects him.



Sensam's Story:
Sensam was born in urban areas where they were facing major issues related to Power cuts, failure to pay bill, can't afford the rent, but then his father got a job in Court and he started to earn well, but still his fees couldn't fulfill the dreams of his children. His Son Sensam then decided to try things where were beyond his imagination at the age of only 5, he started to go on state orgs, he learned state rules and found many loopholes, which he used in many ways to avoid situations. This thing helped him to earn some money and he started to realize the value of money and the wearing in this Corrupt state where people with money had the most power and always free of taxes while at the other hand poors were demolished under taxes and couldn't get enough resources.
After collecting some money, Sensam Decided to leave the state and Visit Los santos where for the First time he learned driving and started to follow all state rules.
As a good knowledge about law, he joined Government and learned how tax system works and how the state manipulates the money and where does it goes. Somehow, he got to realize that this state was corrupt as well but not at the level where his previous state was he acknowledged all the rules and learned how to bypass them all, he himself never even tried to be corrupt but the Corrupt system and people around him made him realize How corrupt people live in this state, in this state for the first time he learned driving many other skills such as Shooting, driving and riding super and hyper bikes, he practiced everything which he learned and he become a master in everything as well.



Outcomes:
1- He used to burnouts with his cars and had earned some money with his performance which allowed him to get a green card for the State.
2- He had done Drag races with other bikers and always out performed everyone with his extreme bike skills such as jumping off the cliffs.
3- He learned how to drive off roads with proper cars. ( following UB driving and using proper cars.)
4- He learned how to fly a Helicopter and perform great stunts which awarded him the Best Pilot of State.
5- He learned how to fly Jett as he worked in NG for a month and learned shooting over there as well, he got medals for his bravery.
6- He understands the importance of legal evidence and regularly equips a single, state-approved waterproof bodycam before any high-risk activity, documenting everything through proper RP commands (/me /do).
7- He took part in a wild survival course in where he learned essential skills like navigation, setting up camps, and surviving in extreme conditions.
8- He often worked as a stunt double for action movies shot in the State, which sharpened his timing, reflexes, and camera awareness during high-speed chases and combat scenes.
9- He often changes his identity by just replacing his Last Name to avoid getting recognized in public places and keeps his identity safe.
10- He worked in EMS as well which helped him to gain knowledge about using first aid kits and avoiding him from spreading diseases and using pills without the consult of doctors.


Thanks For Reading my Biography.!
Warm Regards: Sensam Xhosa.
(I tried to make biography in sense of IC so that it looks more realistic when doing any actions.)
 

Mike Wolfe

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Wrong outcomes... it should be in the form of actions not achievements​
 
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