Rejected Fail RP | 143924, 3954

[Modesan Metin]

Greetings,
We were standing in our headquarters when 2 unknown men came out and opened fire inside the HQ.
We died in our own HQ.
After killing him, he looted with a gun in both hands.
After killing him, he finished him.
Please do what is necessary for everyone to enjoy the game.
Have a good day.

 

[Devil Ucchiha]

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[Devil Ucchiha]

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Invalid POV , Thread owner Voice Not Recorded , File a new complaint with Proper POV
Fix the Title
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