Rejected NLR + GR 6.8 + MG | 140643

[Dark voller]

NLR: I killed him in time 0:37 and he come back after 15 minutes you can see it in other Pov in time 0:43

MG: he's friends coming of email I think because they come of no where

GR 6.8: in time 0:45 when I was dead, he starts assaulting my mother

 

[Avanshh Yadav]

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[Eagle Wixx]

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[Avanshh Yadav]

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