Rejected VDM, MK I 422908

[Tony Stank I 436691]

They trespassed into DOC and started ramming all around. Later they both started shooting and killing everyone. At the end one of them did MK.

Please if the thread is not made according to rules instead of just rejecting it let me know what needs to be fixed so i make sure rule breakers are properly punished.
Thank you

 

[Arpit Negi]

Reviewing…​

 

[Arpit Negi]

On Consideration​

 

[Arpit Negi]

Rejected No audio in POV ​