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Rejected Leader Of Marabunta Grande | Amenadiel Marshal

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Arnavnegi

Ex Deputy Of Vagos
Player
Joined
Apr 5, 2022
Messages
72
- Name : Arnav Negi
- Age : 17
- Time Zone : GMT+5:30
- ᴀᴠᴇʀᴀɢᴇ Online / per Day : 4-15 Hrs
- Your Discord : LuciferMS#7446
- Your NickName : Amenadiel Marshal
- Your ID : 12301
( || )Additional information

Leader Of The Marabunta Grande

(Why Do u want to be a leader of this specific Organization ? ( List at least of three reason with explanation )


- First of all, since I arrived to the city, the crime was part of me. I've joined to Families gang , Bloods gang , Ballas Gang , Vagos and it was part of my life and I have joined Legal Orgs also like LSPD , NG , SAHP , GOV USSS So I have all the experience of these legal and illegal orgs and I know how to be not catched and protect my gang members from Police . I used to be high rank in the gang as well as in legal orgs and did everything I can to the gang by investing all of my time to the gang as a member in the gang . Right Now I am High Command in Vagos .

- I want to make sure that if i get the organization that it will not spread any toxicity to anyone inside the organization or anyone outside of the organization because i personally don't like when there is toxicity in the organizations or in general so i will make sure that it will not happen.


-Since my first day in city I have been involved with gangs. I have lived and died in ghetto, my utter dedication towards illegal organisation has taught me illegal RP and I have also understood the terms and rules of the city in a proper way. I, in the most generous way believe that I am perfectly fit for the leadership role of Marabunta Grande.

( ||| ) Your advice for improving Roleplay level in organization

I want to improve it by being an active gang by doing store robberies on a regular interval such like Clands , Battleship , NG Raid , Gun Store Robbery and much more events. I want to give new players equal opportunities to progress with the gang and give them a chance to do what they want . If I see that a member is doing googd and being active then I will award him with a lil bonus and a rank up.

I would create events that have never been done before , here I'm talking about Global events. I want to create something new , creative which would be fun for both legal and illegal sides. We have some events but it seems to be one sided in some situation so to remove it I will implement several events for Legal/ Illegal/Civilians . Such like assassination of Governor , attack on gov rally , assassination of Chief of Police these were some names of events I would do If I succeed in getting leadership.

I have personally noticed that Gangs has eventually become all about Turfs and less about Clands/Ghetto Fights/and robberies.

I would advice all the organizations to indulge more into RP, I have personally noticed how no gang ever tries to hit NGs Ammo run or encashment as well. I would want to mantain good terms with the other organization leaders and do such events where LEOs stands as a strong pillar. To make things short, I simply want to improve the relation Illegal Org leaders have among each other. I want to promote collaboration among the gangs to instigate more dominance in the city..

( IV ) My goals as Marabunta ' s
Leader?

-Create & Organize the organization
-Make the organization as terrorist organization
-Create fun RP situation
-Create massive global events for the players

-Successfully doing first term without any warns


I hope my application reaches the curator in good health. Looking forward to hear from you guys.

THANKS FOR READING

Arnav Negi
 

Arnavnegi

Ex Deputy Of Vagos
Player
Joined
Apr 5, 2022
Messages
72
this all copy
Lol bro I respect your comment but let admin see this and admin is far way better than you in finding out who has copied or not and if I may have copied then he will reject it no issues bro thank you for commenting . 😄 Btw I copied mine previous application only and there is no problem in copying your own previous application which got accepted.
 

Phantom thakur

SAHP | LSPD
Player
Joined
Feb 19, 2022
Messages
52
- Name : Arnav Negi
- Age : 17
- Time Zone : GMT+5:30
- ᴀᴠᴇʀᴀɢᴇ Online / per Day : 4-15 Hrs
- Your Discord : LuciferMS#7446
- Your NickName : Amenadiel Marshal
- Your ID : 12301
( || )Additional information

Leader Of The Marabunta Grande

(Why Do u want to be a leader of this specific Organization ? ( List at least of three reason with explanation )


- First of all, since I arrived to the city, the crime was part of me. I've joined to Families gang , Bloods gang , Ballas Gang , Vagos and it was part of my life and I have joined Legal Orgs also like LSPD , NG , SAHP , GOV USSS So I have all the experience of these legal and illegal orgs and I know how to be not catched and protect my gang members from Police . I used to be high rank in the gang as well as in legal orgs and did everything I can to the gang by investing all of my time to the gang as a member in the gang . Right Now I am High Command in Vagos .

- I want to make sure that if i get the organization that it will not spread any toxicity to anyone inside the organization or anyone outside of the organization because i personally don't like when there is toxicity in the organizations or in general so i will make sure that it will not happen.


-Since my first day in city I have been involved with gangs. I have lived and died in ghetto, my utter dedication towards illegal organisation has taught me illegal RP and I have also understood the terms and rules of the city in a proper way. I, in the most generous way believe that I am perfectly fit for the leadership role of Marabunta Grande.

( ||| ) Your advice for improving Roleplay level in organization

I want to improve it by being an active gang by doing store robberies on a regular interval such like Clands , Battleship , NG Raid , Gun Store Robbery and much more events. I want to give new players equal opportunities to progress with the gang and give them a chance to do what they want . If I see that a member is doing googd and being active then I will award him with a lil bonus and a rank up.

I would create events that have never been done before , here I'm talking about Global events. I want to create something new , creative which would be fun for both legal and illegal sides. We have some events but it seems to be one sided in some situation so to remove it I will implement several events for Legal/ Illegal/Civilians . Such like assassination of Governor , attack on gov rally , assassination of Chief of Police these were some names of events I would do If I succeed in getting leadership.

I have personally noticed that Gangs has eventually become all about Turfs and less about Clands/Ghetto Fights/and robberies.


I would advice all the organizations to indulge more into RP, I have personally noticed how no gang ever tries to hit NGs Ammo run or encashment as well. I would want to mantain good terms with the other organization leaders and do such events where LEOs stands as a strong pillar. To make things short, I simply want to improve the relation Illegal Org leaders have among each other. I want to promote collaboration among the gangs to instigate more dominance in the city..

( IV ) My goals as Marabunta ' s
Leader?

-Create & Organize the organization
-Make the organization as terrorist organization
-Create fun RP situation
-Create massive global events for the players

-Successfully doing first term without any warns

I hope my application reaches the curator in good health. Looking forward to hear from you guys.

THANKS FOR READING

Arnav Negi
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Ethan Murphy

🎵ישראל היא הבית שלי🎵
Player
Joined
May 10, 2021
Messages
2,436
Application rejected.​


Reason(s):
1) Lack of effort in making/posting your application. For an application to become a leader and take on a higher responsibility, I deem it insufficiently written with underdeveloped statements, and a general overall lack of supporting points to prove why you would be a good fit as a Marabunta Grande leader (Look at the second point to understand why i stated this).
2) You copied older applications (Maybe of your own creation) and I noticed that other previously written applications were mixed into each other. I personally find it dissatisfactory that you didn't take the time to make your own/a new application, and it feeds towards the reason this application was denied.

This doesn't entirely mean something bad, just reapply next time with a more in depth application, and one that is completely written by you, that is completely new and original.
 
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