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Abbee

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State Organization: Government
Name: Mark Mage
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Nationality: Sweden
Place of Birth: Knivsta
Sexuality: Straight
Eye color: Green
Hair color: Dark Brown
Tattoos: Tatoos all over
Strengths: Good communication skills, Good driver, good shooter
Weakness: Get heated in arguments

Life Story: 100-250 Words
I grew up in a small town in sweden with parents who struggled financially. My parents never really had a nice house or a nice car wich made it really hard for me growing up i got bullied and hated on every day everywhere i went. And that ignited a flame inside me a flame of revenge and anger so i was going to prove them wrong. I was a pretty smart kid growing up with good general knowledge so i graduated school pretty easily. After my graduation i didnt really know what to do i just layed in my bed day in and day out with no motivation at all until one day when i was scrolling on my phone when i saw on the news that our governor got attacked wich made me really angry becuse i have always liked politics and i liked the governor we had at that time. And thats when it hit me i wanted to serve and protect the governor so i directly made an application for the united states secret service.

Career Story: 100-350 Words Outcomes:
My career in the united states secret service started pretty rough i felt like i wasn't fit enough and wasn't prepared for the challenges ahead. I still got some rude comments here and there but i tried to focus on myself and not on the others. I made it trough the academy and felt pretty proud of myself i was the first succesfull one in my family wich made me pretty happy. And just the tought about serving my country and our governor made me feel like i was worthy, like i belonged somewhere. Along the way i chose to join the department of corrections because i got payed more. Money was the number one thing on my mind i always thought about money. And thats where the turning point in my career occured. I started getting bribes from the inmates that if i could sneek them out of jail i would get more money then i could ever imagine and i of course said yes. One day i met an inmate that i cant explain i just felt anger when he was around me, and he gave me money to do illegal stuff for him while he was doing time in prison. And thats where i found my career. I felt power that i never had felt before, it was amazing! And money was not a problem i could buy my dream house and my dream car. I became ruthless, i went from an protector to a betrayer. This made me feel like i belonged somewhere, a life outside of the bounds of the law.

Max 10 outcomes
1- Mark can take bribes. (up to 100k and illegal items on the suspect)
2- Mark can use Darknet to help her friends or family escape prison.
3- Mark can search for bodycams (/try 2 times per situation) and break bodycams if found (/do).
4- Mark can deny and lie about calling a lawyer and refuse to provide any type of identification.
5- Mark can help her friends or family members in any situation.
6- Mark can intimidate/torture people on/off-duty if they don’t want to follow his demands. (No killing)
7- Mark can frighten and disrespect anyone as gang members do. (Keeping in mind toxicity, Gen 6.10 and 6.19)
8- Mark can perform illegal actions with her friends or family.
9- Mark can rob 10-15s if brought to a undisclosed location (Only within RP reasons).
10- Mark can work together with other corrupt officers or agents
 

Kira Hill

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Rejected.
Apply again and fix things below:

Outcome 2: only once per day.
Outcome 5: Rejected, not specific enough.
Outcome 6: No OOC toxicity.
Outcome 7: Rejected, similar to outcome 6.
Outcome 8: Rejected, Not specific enough.
Outcome 9: only 100k in total value.
Outcome 10: Work together how? make it specific​
 
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